The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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In conclusion, it is clear that both sides of the argument have valid points. However, after considering the evidence, it can be said that [your main opinion / position]. Therefore, it is important to [recommendation / final thought].
βSome people think students should wear uniforms. Others believe they should have the freedom to choose their clothes.βπ Conclusion:
In conclusion, it is clear that both sides of the argument have valid points. However, after considering the evidence, it can be said that wearing uniforms is more beneficial for discipline and equality. Therefore, schools should encourage students to wear uniforms to create a fair learning environment.
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"Daylight"π
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Telling myself I won't go there
Oh, but I know that I won't care
Tryna wash away all the blood I've spilt
This lust is a burden that we both share
Two sinners can't atone from a lone prayer
Souls tied, intertwined by pride and guilt
(Ooh) There's darkness in the distance
From the way that I've been livin'
(Ooh) But I know I can't resist it
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
You and I drink the poison from the same vine
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
Hidin' all of our sins from the daylight
From the daylight, runnin' from the daylight
From the daylight, runnin' from the daylight
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
Tellin' myself it's the last time
Can you spare any mercy that you might find
If I'm down on my knees again?
Deep down, way down, Lord, I try
Try to follow your light, but it's nighttime
Please don't leave me in the end
(Ooh) There's darkness in the distance
I'm beggin' for forgiveness
(Ooh) But I know I might resist it, oh
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
You and I drink the poison from the same vine
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
Hidin' all of our sins from the daylight
From the daylight, runnin' from the daylight
From the daylight, runnin' from the daylight
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
You and I drink the poison from the same vine
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
Hidin' all of our sins from the daylight
From the daylight, runnin' from the daylight
From the daylight, runnin' from the daylight
Oh, I love it and I hate it at the same time
#Lyrics #Music
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βοΈ Direct Question
β Q: Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
π‘ ANSWER:
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π Band: 7.5+
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βοΈ Direct Question
β Q: Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
π‘ ANSWER:
It is not until middle age that married couples in todayβs society are delaying having their babies. This trend is attributable to many factors in life, and it certainly will have great impacts on society in general and family life in particular.
Looking more closely into the matter, there are some possible causes of peopleβs avoidance of being parents. A prominent reason could be that married couples, especially young ones are becoming more independent in their decisions in contrast to their predecessors. As a result of their freedom of choice, they tend to spend more time advancing the career or pursuing higher education before finally having any newborn family members. In addition, many prospective parents could avoid pregnancy owing to the fact that they are unable to support their family financially, and raising a baby is sometimes too costly for parents to afford. Therefore couples are likely to wait until they have earned more income in preparation for their babies to appear.
As more people are hesitating to have children, both society and domestic life are subject to many negative impacts. Firstly, the increasing age of pregnancy usually entails higher health risks for the mother as well as the baby, as suggested by some researchers, which will undoubtedly adversely affect family life. Secondly, the older parents are, the more likely that the generation gap will widen. By the time the late babies are grown up, they might encounter difficulty adapting to their parentsβ ways of life. Thirdly, the reduction in the rates of birth can lead to a shortage of the labour force nationwide, hindering the development of the national economy.
In conclusion, people these days have many reasons to have children at an older age, and the rise of such a trend will produce some certain negative effects on not only society but also family.
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Some people argue that families who send their children to private schools should be exempt from paying taxes that fund public education. While this perspective may seem fair at first glance, I strongly disagree with this notion for several reasons.
Firstly, education is a public good that benefits society as a whole. Even if some families opt for private education, they still rely on the contributions of state-educated citizens, such as doctors, engineers, and public service workers. If only those who use public schools funded them, there would be significant financial strain, leading to a decline in the quality of education for millions of students.
Secondly, taxation is based on collective responsibility rather than personal benefit. For instance, people without children still contribute to education funding because an educated population leads to economic growth and social stability. Allowing exemptions would set a dangerous precedent where individuals demand tax reductions for public services they do not use, such as healthcare or infrastructure, weakening the entire system.
Lastly, private school students may still indirectly benefit from state education funding. Public schools contribute to teacher training, curriculum development, and educational research, which also influence private institutions. Moreover, if a private school student transfers to a public school or requires special educational services, they should have access to a well-funded system.
In conclusion, families who send their children to private schools should continue paying taxes that support public education. Doing so ensures equal opportunities for all children, upholds social responsibility, and sustains the long-term benefits of an educated society.
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Some people believe that students should be taught academic subjects only, while others believe that students should also be taught practical skills. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the debate over whether students should focus solely on academic subjects or also be taught practical skills has become increasingly relevant. While some argue that academic knowledge is the foundation of success, others believe that practical skills are essential for real-world application. This essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why a balanced approach is the most beneficial.
On one hand, proponents of academic-focused education argue that subjects such as mathematics, science, and literature develop critical thinking and analytical skills. These are important for pursuing higher education and for careers in fields such as medicine, engineering, and law. Moreover, academic qualifications are often considered a key criterion by employers and universities, making them crucial for future opportunities.
On the other hand, practical skills such as cooking, financial literacy, communication, and time management are equally important in everyday life. Supporters of this view claim that education should prepare students for life, not just for exams. In fact, many graduates struggle to manage their finances or perform basic tasks because these skills are not taught in schools. Introducing practical subjects can also reduce stress, improve student engagement, and make learning more enjoyable.
In conclusion, while academic subjects lay the groundwork for intellectual development and career growth, practical skills ensure that students can navigate everyday life confidently. Therefore, a well-rounded curriculum that includes both is the ideal solution.
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Hey Sam,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. Remember that I went to Samarkand with my family members to visit Registan Square. I rented a bike to walk there. I liked the quality of rental company and price. I think that you should visit here to see sightseeing places. I look forward to hearing good news from you soon.
Best Wishes,
Dostonbek
Dear Bahodir,
I am writing these few lines to express my feeling and advice about a rented bike from your company. I visited Registan Square with my whole family. Thank you for your rental company.
Nonetheless, we faced up some challenges connected to get a bicycle. There was long queue in rental service company. This setting made us nervous and late to other things. I believe that this company should restrict in renting system which can improve the customer flow in the upcoming future
In conclusion we were incredibly happy to visit beautiful places. I hope we will go there again next summer.
Yours sincerely,
Okhunov Dostonbek
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Many IELTS/CEFR candidates struggle in the Writing section because they fail to fully develop their ideas or go off topic.
One common problem is that students do not explain their main points with enough examples or supporting details, which makes their arguments weak and unclear. Another frequent issue is misunderstanding the question or writing irrelevant information. As a result, their essays lose coherence and do not directly answer the task, leading to a lower band score.
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Dear [Friendβs Name],
I hope this letter finds you well. Iβm writing to [share/tell/ask] about [mavzu]. Itβs been a while since we last spoke, so I thought Iβd let you know whatβs going on.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to [explain/inform/request/complain/apply] regarding [mavzu]. The purpose of this letter is to provide you with the necessary details and seek your assistance in this matter.
1. Introduction
β’ Paraphrase the question
β’ Give your opinion
2. Body Paragraph 1
β’ Give
first reason
β’ Explain
β’ Give an example
3. Body Paragraph 2
β’ Give second reason
β’ Explain
β’ Give an example
4. Conclusion
β’ Restate opinion
β’ Summarize reasons
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22:00 | FREE LESSON | LISTENING
22:00 | FREE LESSON | WRITING
22:00 | FREE LESSON | SPEAKING
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22:00 | FREE LESSON | READING
22:00 | FREE LESSON | LISTENING
22:00 | FREE LESSON | WRITING
22:00 | FREE LESSON | SPEAKING
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β 5 Common Mistakes Students Make in IELTS and CEFR Writing (and how to fix them!) β
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βοΈ Main Content:
1οΈβ£ Overusing Simple Words
2οΈβ£ Writing Like a Message, Not an Essay
3οΈβ£ Repeating Words Too Often
4οΈβ£ Using Informal Words
5οΈβ£ Not Checking Grammar and Articles
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βοΈ Main Content:
β People are very good at using phones.
β People are highly skilled at using phones.
π§ Use academic adjectives (highly, significantly, particularlyβ¦)
β
I think this is good.
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It can be argued that this approach is beneficial.
π§
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β
The graph shows sales. Sales increased in 2020. Sales decreased in 2021.
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The graph shows sales, which
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Kids use the internet a lot.
β
Children use the internet frequently.
π§
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People use computer for study.
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People use
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Always check articles (a, an, the) and plural forms before submitting!
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β 5 Common Mistakes Students Make in IELTS and CEFR Writing (and how to fix them!) β
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People are highly skilled at using phones.β¦
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