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Museums have long played an important role in society by preserving culture, history, and knowledge. While some argue that museums should primarily serve as places of entertainment, others believe that their main function is to educate the public. Both perspectives hold merit and will be examined in this essay before offering a personal viewpoint.

On one hand, making museums enjoyable and entertaining can significantly increase public interest and attendance. Interactive exhibits, engaging activities, and immersive technology can transform traditional museums into dynamic spaces that attract people of all ages. When visitors are entertained, they are more likely to engage with the material and retain the information presented. This approach is especially effective for children and younger audiences, who may find conventional exhibitions dull and uninviting.

On the other hand, many believe that the fundamental role of museums is to educate. Museums serve as guardians of history, science, and art, offering the public access to valuable information and rare artifacts. Their purpose is to deepen understanding and foster appreciation of different cultures, events, and discoveries. Education-oriented museums ensure that visitors leave with greater knowledge and awareness, which is particularly important in a world that values lifelong learning.

In my opinion, the best museums successfully combine both elements. They should be designed in a way that entertains while also educating. Striking a balance between fun and informative experiences can make museums more inclusive and impactful, ensuring they remain relevant and valued by future generations.

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☘️ Advanyages / Disadvantages

βœ… Q: Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals?

πŸ’‘ Answer:

It is true that volunteer work provides great benefits for both participants and the community. However, forcing the youth to engage in those activities may be counterproductive, as now will be explained.

On the one hand, if young people were required to do social jobs for free, there would be certain advantages for all sides related. A vast majority of the younger population are energetic, dynamic and passionate about improving themselves, and it is the unpaid work that can satisfy that demand. Charitable campaigns such as teaching primary schoolchildren or helping the elderly with their daily activities provide the participants with not only new knowledge and skills, but also a sense of community and a belief that they are a pivotal part of societies. Vice versa, the government, with the assistance from young people, has a productive workforce available for charity work without wasting money on the recruitment process.

On the other hand, I believe that the disadvantages of this are more important. Working on a volunteer basis may distract young people from their priorities. For example, students of state universities and colleges are expected to attend lessons, complete homework and even consult external academic materials. With such a heavy workload, those students should spend their little remaining time relaxing or playing sports rather than joining free social activities. Regarding those who do not go to school, vocational or internship courses are what they should seek for. Professional skills from such classes are tools for these individuals to achieve a stable later life; therefore, the community should allow them to pursue their career.

In conclusion, the youth can choose to support others, and the volunteer work should never be made obligatory.


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☘️ Agree / Disagree


Q: The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

πŸ’‘ Answer:

It has been claimed that like smoking, mobile phones should be banned in some places due to their harmful effects. While I accept that the use of mobile phones is antisocial in some ways, I believe it has more benefits and therefore should not be prohibited.

On the one hand, I agree that the use of mobile phones can sometimes be antisocial. Firstly, these devices might disturb people's work or study in some cases. For example, the sound from a mobile phone can interrupt a lecture, which affects the concentration of students. Secondly, the use of mobile phones also adversely impacts communication between people. Since individuals currently tend to spend too much time using mobile phones, they seem to have less time to interact with others.

On the other hand, I disagree that mobile phones should be banned because of some reasons. The first one is that since they allow people who live far away from each other to speak or send messages, they help people keep in touch more easily. For instance, students who study abroad can use mobile phones to make phone calls or even video calls with their family. The second reason is that mobile phones often provide users with many useful applications such as maps and weather forecast, which can make people's lives become easier. Additionally, using mobile phones is not as bad as smoking as some people think. While smoking directly affects people's health and leads to health problems, the negative influences of mobile phones are less serious.

In conclusion, while I agree that mobile phones are sometimes antisocial, I believe they should not be banned.

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➑️ Global Warming

🏷 Gases such as carbon dioxide trap heat from the sun.
🏷 This causes global temperatures to rise.
🏷 This process is known as the greenhouse effect.
🏷 Human activity is a major factor in the rise of the greenhouse gases.
🏷 Factories and vehicles produce emissions and exhaust fumes.
🏷 Many developing countries are becoming industrialised.
🏷 The number of cars on our streets is growing.
🏷 Cheap air travel is allowing more people to fly.

➑️ Effects of Global Warming

🏷 Global warming will have a significant impact on our planet.
🏷 Rising temperatures will cause melting of the polar ice caps.
🏷 Sea levels will rise.
🏷 We can expect more extreme weather conditions.
🏷 Flooding and droughts may become more common.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my frustration regarding my missed flight with [Airline Name], flight number [Flight Number], scheduled to depart from [Airport Name] on [Date]. Due to an unexpected issue at the airport, I was unable to board my flight.

Upon arrival at the airport well in advance, I encountered an unusually long security check queue caused by a technical malfunction in the screening system. Despite my best efforts to pass through security swiftly, the delay resulted in my missing the boarding time. I immediately approached your airline’s staff for assistance, but no alternative was offered.

Missing this flight significantly disrupted my plans, as I was traveling for an important business meeting in [Destination], which I had to cancel. Additionally, I incurred extra costs for accommodation and rescheduling my journey.

Given the circumstances, I kindly request compensation for my expenses or a refund for the ticket. I would appreciate your prompt response and assistance in resolving this matter.

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βœ… Q:
The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

πŸ’‘ Answer:

The pictures illustrate a number of important changes which took place in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

From the maps, it is clear that the most noticeable change that occurred in the town was that of a huge lake. Additionally, the forest and farmlands had completely disappeared by 2010.

In 1990, there was an ancient structure and a forest with rare flora and fauna to the west of the river, and irrigated farmlands to the east. However, with the construction of a dam wall, those features disappeared beneath a large lake, which also became a fishing area in 2010.

Looking at the maps in more detail, while the mountains still existed, the villages in the far east were relocated further south of the mountains, and a large hotel was built in their place. Meanwhile, a hydroelectric power dam was constructed with a wide range of electricity pylons appearing nearby.


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☘️ Problem / Solution

βœ… Q: In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?

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In many parts of the world, student discipline is becoming a major issue that teachers, parents, and school administrators have to deal with. This essay will first look at the reasons why this is happening, and then explore solutions for it.

The primary reason for this increase in bad behaviour is the lack of respect for teachers in western society since the late twentieth century, which is partly due to the emphasis placed upon personal freedoms and individual rights. With massive cultural upheaval, the role of a teacher has diminished, and school pupils can run amok. Nowadays, teachers are powerless to stop their students from misbehaving in the classroom, and what is worse is that they are afraid of the consequences of being firm in their disciplinary procedures. When teachers are deemed to be too strict, parents will complain and it is possible that the teacher could lose their job.

In order to solve this, great changes will need to be made. For a start, a teacher’s authority needs to be established, and this means making changes that reduce the likelihood of their position being questioned. From misbehaving pupils to unreasonable parents, there needs to be support for the teacher from above. This sort of institutional help has been missing for decades as education becomes more of a service industry wherein β€œthe customer” is always right. Schools need to implement firm but fair rules that all pupils must abide by and there should be equally firm but fair punishments meted out accordingly.

In conclusion, discipline problems are now common in many schools, and that is because teachers are no longer given the respect they are due. Schools and government authorities need to work to reinforce the importance of respecting teachers.

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Zoos have long been a topic of debate, with some arguing they are essential for conservation and education, while others believe they are unethical and harmful to animals. Both perspectives have valid points, and this essay will discuss each view before presenting a personal opinion.


On the one hand, opponents of zoos claim that wild animals deserve to live in their natural habitats, not in confined spaces. They argue that zoos can cause stress and unnatural behavior in animals, as they are often kept in enclosures that are much smaller than their natural range. Moreover, some zoos prioritize entertainment over animal welfare, which raises ethical concerns. For example, animals may be trained to perform tricks or kept in unsuitable climates, leading to poor health and mental distress.


On the other hand, supporters of zoos believe they play a crucial role in conservation and education. Many endangered species are protected and even bred in captivity, helping to prevent extinction. Zoos also offer people, especially children, the opportunity to learn about wildlife and develop an appreciation for nature. In well-managed zoos, animals are cared for by professionals who understand their needs, and efforts are made to replicate their natural environment as closely as possible.


In my opinion, while some zoos do more harm than good, well-regulated zoos can be beneficial. If they focus on conservation, education, and animal welfare rather than profit, they can serve an important purpose. Strict guidelines and regular inspections should be enforced to ensure animals are treated with respect and kept in appropriate conditions.

In conclusion, although keeping wild animals in captivity can raise serious ethical issues, zoos can also contribute to the protection and understanding of wildlife. The key is to ensure that zoos are properly managed and genuinely focused on the animals' well-being.


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COMPLAINT LETTER uchun so'zlar✏️

⭐️ Opening the letter
- I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
- I wish to bring to your attention...
- I would like to complain about...

⭐️Describing the issue
- Unfortunately, the item I received was...
- I encountered several problems with...
- The product did not meet my expectations because...

⭐️Expressing your feelings
- I am very disappointed that...
- It was quite frustrating to experience...
- I expected better from your company...

⭐️ Requesting a resolution(muammoni to'g'irlash uchun ko'riladigan chora talab qilish)
- I would appreciate it if you could...
- I kindly request a refund or replacement...
- Please investigate this issue and provide a solution...

⭐️Closing the letter
- Thank you for your attention to this matter.
- I look forward to your prompt response.
- I hope to hear from you soon regarding this issue.



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Some people argue that families who send their children to private schools should be exempt from paying taxes that fund public education. While this perspective may seem fair at first glance, I strongly disagree with this notion for several reasons.

Firstly, education is a public good that benefits society as a whole. Even if some families opt for private education, they still rely on the contributions of state-educated citizens, such as doctors, engineers, and public service workers. If only those who use public schools funded them, there would be significant financial strain, leading to a decline in the quality of education for millions of students.

Secondly, taxation is based on collective responsibility rather than personal benefit. For instance, people without children still contribute to education funding because an educated population leads to economic growth and social stability. Allowing exemptions would set a dangerous precedent where individuals demand tax reductions for public services they do not use, such as healthcare or infrastructure, weakening the entire system.

Lastly, private school students may still indirectly benefit from state education funding. Public schools contribute to teacher training, curriculum development, and educational research, which also influence private institutions. Moreover, if a private school student transfers to a public school or requires special educational services, they should have access to a well-funded system.

In conclusion, families who send their children to private schools should continue paying taxes that support public education. Doing so ensures equal opportunities for all children, upholds social responsibility, and sustains the long-term benefits of an educated society.

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πŸ”΄ Discuss both views
βœ… Q: Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

πŸ’‘ Answer:
Finding ways to improve educational quality is often one of the top priorities in every education system. In some cultures, high school students are encouraged to give their opinions about teachers, but I believe that this can also give rise to lack of respect and discipline in the classroom.

On the one hand, it is true that feedback from learners may contribute to an improvement in educational quality. In many cases, the level of comprehension of students relies very much not on the content of the lesson but on the way teachers conduct it. If, for example, the class is slow, it will be ineffective for teachers to teach too fast so that most students fail to retain the information. Without the comments of students, it would be difficult to know whether the speed of the lesson is appropriate for the class, which may eventually impair the quality of the lesson.

However, there are several drawbacks of allowing students to make comments and criticism on their teachers. Firstly, teachers can be vulnerable to the negative words of students. Many will feel that their efforts in delivering the lesson deserve praise rather than criticism or any form of feedback. This idea is commonly shared by teachers in the education systems of many Asian countries. Secondly, the classroom may be in chaos due to massive numbers of comments. Opinions vary from students to students, and it would be impractical for teachers to work out a way of teaching that can satisfy all students.

In conclusion, it seems to me that encouraging high school students to comment about their teachers does not necessarily mean an improvement in education quality.

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πŸ”” Ideas about "Global Issues"

➑️ Positives of Immigration and Multi-Cultural Societies:
🏷 From an economic perspective, immigration can be extremely positive.
🏷 Many immigrants have skills that are needed in the country they move to.
🏷 Immigrants who find work contribute to the economy of their new country.
🏷 Many immigrants send money home to help family members.
🏷 Immigration also creates cultural diversity.
🏷 People of many different nationalities learn to live together.
🏷 This can help people to become more open-minded and tolerant.

➑️ Negatives of Immigration:
🏷 Some people believe that immigrants take jobs that should go to local people.
🏷 Some immigrant workers work longer hours for less money.
🏷 Companies might pay lower salaries to immigrant workers.
🏷 Unemployment rates could rise if there are too many immigrants.

➑️ Opinions about Immigration:
🏷 Immigration can help the economy of a country.
🏷 It can create multi-cultural societies.
🏷 However, immigration needs to be controlled.
🏷 In many countries, immigrants need visas or work permits.
🏷 Governments should stop companies from exploiting immigrant workers.
🏷 Foreign and local workers should have the right to equal pay and conditions

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πŸ”” Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay318

〰️ accelerate: to happen or to make something happen faster or earlier than expected
β€” Example: Inflation continues to accelerate.

〰️ To boost something: to make something increase, or become better or more successful
β€” Example: The movie helped boost her screen career.

〰️ Dire: very serious.
β€” Example: Such action may have dire consequences.

〰️ To grind to a halt: to go slower gradually and then stop completely.
β€” Example: Production ground to a halt during the strike.


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☘️ Agree / Disagree

βœ… Q: Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?

πŸ’‘ Answer:

It is true that there has been increasingly more competition between the young and the old who are in search of the same job. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, steps can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.

As more elderly applicants have to compete with the younger ones for a job, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that this will obviously pose more challenges for the young who are struggling to find a place in the labour market. Older people, understandably, are usually given more favourable consideration by recruiters due to their vast experience in comparison with the young generation, which can lead to a shortage of work for younger people, increasing the rates of unemployment. Furthermore, when being unemployed and lacking a stable source of income, people are likely to commit crimes such as robbery to feed themselves and their family. As a result, not only will the citizens’ quality of life diminish, but their safety will also be threatened.

However, there are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, decreasing the legal retirement age can alleviate the pressure of competition the young have to take. Secondly, increasing the state pension is also an ideal option for this issue because some retirees who find their pension sufficient for living will not have to return to work. Finally, governments can create more available jobs by attracting international organizations to invest with additional incentives.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as older people are competing with the young for the same job.

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πŸ”” Ideas about "Global Issues"

➑️ Problems in Developing Countries
🏷 Developing countries face a range of problems.
🏷 Standards of healthcare and education are low.
🏷 Life expectancy is usually lower than in developed countries.
🏷 There is a lack of infrastructure, employment and good quality housing.
🏷 Many people are forced to live in poverty.
🏷 Food, drinking water and basic medicines are in short supply.

➑️ How to Help Developing Countries
🏷 The best form of help for developing countries is development aid.
🏷 Richer nations can help by investing in long-term projects.
🏷 Governments and charities can help by building new houses and schools.
🏷 Globalisation may also help developing countries.
🏷 Multi-national companies are creating jobs in developing countries.
🏷 On the other hand, many people emigrate to find work in richer countries.
🏷 They often send money back home to their families.
🏷 This money helps to improve the standard of living in developing countries.

➑️ Immigration
🏷 Some people move to another country in search of a better life.
🏷 Many immigrants come from less developed countries.
🏷 Richer, industrialised countries may offer opportunities for employment.
🏷 Free healthcare and schooling are available in some developed countries.
🏷 Other people migrate to a foreign country to improve their academic qualifications.

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▢️ IELTS Writing: 7 Study Tips to Increase Your Score

1️⃣. Complete Writing Task 2 First

2️⃣. Avoid Informal Writing

This IELTS writing preparation tip applies primarily to the Academic test, but is important to keep in mind for the General test as well. While your answers don’t have to be formal in style on the General test (unless you choose to write a formal letter, of course), it’s best to avoid certain informal writing practices. For instance, avoid using abbreviationsβ€”always write out the full word. Also, avoid writing in the first or second personβ€”I, me, youβ€”unless instructed to do so.

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Is Social Media Doing More Harm Than Good to Young People?

In today’s digital world, social media plays a central role in the lives of young people. While it offers numerous advantages, such as easy communication, access to information, and entertainment, many argue that social media is causing more harm than good. I strongly believe that social media has a negative impact on young people’s mental health, self-esteem, and productivity.

First of all, one of the most serious problems is its effect on mental health. Studies have shown that excessive use of social media can lead to anxiety, depression, and loneliness. Young people often compare themselves to others online, which can create unrealistic expectations and feelings of inadequacy. Seeing others’ β€œperfect” lives may make them feel their own life is not good enough.

Secondly, social media can damage self-esteem. Many young users seek validation through likes, comments, and followers. When they don’t receive the attention they expect, it can lower their confidence. This pressure to look good or act a certain way can also push them to use filters or even edit their appearance, which creates a false image of reality.

In addition, social media is a major distraction. Many students spend hours scrolling instead of studying or doing productive activities. This can affect their academic performance and even disturb their sleep, especially when they stay up late using their phones.

However, it is important to mention that social media also has benefits. It allows young people to stay connected with friends, express themselves, and learn about the world. When used in moderation and with guidance, it can be a useful tool.

In conclusion, although social media has some positive sides, I believe it is doing more harm than good to young people. It affects their mental health, lowers self-esteem, and wastes their time. Therefore, parents, teachers, and society should help young people use it wisely and develop healthy habits.

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In recent years, travelling to remote and less-explored destinations has become increasingly popular among tourists. While this trend offers several benefits, it also poses notable challenges. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages before presenting a final opinion.

One of the main drawbacks of visiting far-flung areas is the potential harm to both travelers and the environment. These off-the-beaten-path destinations are often underdeveloped and may lack basic infrastructure such as hospitals, clean water, and transportation. As a result, tourists might be exposed to unexpected risks, including dangerous wildlife, unfamiliar diseases, or natural hazards. Furthermore, increased human activity in pristine natural environments can lead to environmental degradation. The construction of roads, hotels, and other facilities may disturb local ecosystems, pollute the area, and threaten rare species.

Despite these issues, there are also significant advantages. Exploring untouched regions allows people to experience nature in its purest form, offering a sense of wonder and connection with the natural world. In addition, visiting such areas can lead to scientific discoveries, such as identifying new plant or animal species that may have medical or ecological importance. Moreover, exposure to these unique environments can raise awareness about the need for environmental protection and inspire both tourists and local communities to take conservation more seriously.

In conclusion, although travelling to remote destinations comes with certain risks and environmental concerns, the opportunity to explore unspoiled nature and contribute to scientific knowledge and environmental awareness makes it a worthwhile pursuit. In my view, the advantages slightly outweigh the disadvantages, provided that such tourism is managed responsibly.

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Nowadays visiting of the beaten track destinations is becoming increasingly popular among tourists.In this essay both pros and cons of this trend would be discussed.

On of the main disadvantage of visiting far reach places around the world is that it can be really dangerous and harmful not only to humans but also to the places themselves.What i mean by this is that these of the beaten track destinations haven't been explored well enough and might be risky to travel around.For example, there can be a plenty of new poisonous animals which can cause different diseases.Secondly, if after a few years these places would be developed and occupied by tourists it can cause a lot of harm to untouched and pure nature.

While this trend has negative sides,it would not be fair to not consider that it also has a few positive sides.One of the main advantages of exploring untouched areas is that we can enjoy there and see rare nature in all its bloom.Furthermore we can discover new plants and creatures and that would help to out scientific advancement.Moreover seeing and being in this wonderful surroundings might encourage us to take care about our planet properly and value its beauty.

In conclusion, Exploring yet difficult to reach destinations has both pros and cons. However in my opinion disadvantages of this trend outweight all advantages.


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