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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Do you think this is a positive
or negative development?
The closure of local shops has recently become more common due to the increasing popularity of large shopping malls. In my opinion, although the disappearance of small shops brings several advantages, it generally causes more harm than good.
Admittedly, there are some benefits to closing down local shops. Firstly, when customers are concentrated in large malls rather than dispersed across multiple locations, they are more likely to receive better service and higher-quality products. This is because it becomes easier for regulatory bodies to monitor fewer, centralized shops. Secondly, replacing numerous small outlets with large-scale shopping centres can accelerate urban development. For instance, in cities like Beijing, the construction of expansive malls has led to the development of road networks linking urban centres with outlying areas.
Nevertheless, the overall impact of such closures tends to be more detrimental. While centralized shops may be easier to regulate, consumers still bear the ultimate responsibility for checking product quality, such as expiration dates. On a community level, the disappearance of local shops undermines neighbourhood economies and reduces convenience for people who rely on them for daily necessities.
In conclusion, although shutting down local shops may simplify quality control and cause some urban improvements, the drawbacks particularly the loss of community convenience and local economic circulation are far more significant. Therefore, I believe the disadvantages of this trend outweigh its potential benefits.
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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Do you think this is a positive
or negative development?
The closure of local shops has recently become more common due to the increasing popularity of large shopping malls. In my opinion, although the disappearance of small shops brings several advantages, it generally causes more harm than good.
Admittedly, there are some benefits to closing down local shops. Firstly, when customers are concentrated in large malls rather than dispersed across multiple locations, they are more likely to receive better service and higher-quality products. This is because it becomes easier for regulatory bodies to monitor fewer, centralized shops. Secondly, replacing numerous small outlets with large-scale shopping centres can accelerate urban development. For instance, in cities like Beijing, the construction of expansive malls has led to the development of road networks linking urban centres with outlying areas.
Nevertheless, the overall impact of such closures tends to be more detrimental. While centralized shops may be easier to regulate, consumers still bear the ultimate responsibility for checking product quality, such as expiration dates. On a community level, the disappearance of local shops undermines neighbourhood economies and reduces convenience for people who rely on them for daily necessities.
In conclusion, although shutting down local shops may simplify quality control and cause some urban improvements, the drawbacks particularly the loss of community convenience and local economic circulation are far more significant. Therefore, I believe the disadvantages of this trend outweigh its potential benefits.
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#WritingTip
⚠️ Try to avoid “get” in writing
The clarity of a sentence will always be improved by omitting “get” or by replacing it with more suitable words.
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1)My supervisor got excited when I got some results using samples I got from Africa. However, she got angry when she got to know that I had got hold of them illegally.
2) My supervisor became excited when I obtained some results using samples from Africa. However, she grew angry when she found out that I had acquired them illegally.
These words are not necessarily the synonyms of "get" , but they explain the idea of the sentence more clearly. So, "get" should be replaced with precise word depending on the context in formal writings
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The clarity of a sentence will always be improved by omitting “get” or by replacing it with more suitable words.
1)My supervisor got excited when I got some results using samples I got from Africa. However, she got angry when she got to know that I had got hold of them illegally.
2) My supervisor became excited when I obtained some results using samples from Africa. However, she grew angry when she found out that I had acquired them illegally.
These words are not necessarily the synonyms of "get" , but they explain the idea of the sentence more clearly. So, "get" should be replaced with precise word depending on the context in formal writings
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Part1: Work or Study One of the most common IELTS Speaking Part 1 topics. Here are some well-structured answers for you all! #SpeakingByMe
We’re starting with the two most common topics in IELTS Speaking Part1: Work/Study and Hometown.
I’ve already shared my sample answers for the Work/Study topic, and now it’s time to move on to Hometown, complete with useful language takeaways.
I’ve already shared my sample answers for the Work/Study topic, and now it’s time to move on to Hometown, complete with useful language takeaways.
Where do you live in?
🗣 I live in slap bang of city center and all those hustle and bustle of city life somehow gets on my nerves. I wish I lived in more tranquil area. You know, honks of cars, all of them sound really irritating at times. But the thing that I like about my place is its location. Many facilities are within a walking distance. So yeah, living in the heart of city got its own advantages as well.
🗣 I live in slap bang of city center and all those hustle and bustle of city life somehow gets on my nerves. I wish I lived in more tranquil area. You know, honks of cars, all of them sound really irritating at times. But the thing that I like about my place is its location. Many facilities are within a walking distance. So yeah, living in the heart of city got its own advantages as well.
What is your town famous for?
🗣 I have to admit that my hometown is a true tourist trap, attracting lots of holidaymakers from all around the world. It's not only famous for its local cuisine, but also deep history. I would say every street in my hometown is steeped in history, so during tourist seasons, it really gets, I mean streets of my town really gets packed like sardines. And people also quite like our local cuisine as it's mouth-watering, and most of the meals are done to a turn in local restaurants.
🗣 I have to admit that my hometown is a true tourist trap, attracting lots of holidaymakers from all around the world. It's not only famous for its local cuisine, but also deep history. I would say every street in my hometown is steeped in history, so during tourist seasons, it really gets, I mean streets of my town really gets packed like sardines. And people also quite like our local cuisine as it's mouth-watering, and most of the meals are done to a turn in local restaurants.
Is your hometown a good place for young people to live in?
🗣 Even though the infrastructure is booming in my hometown, I still have to admit that the place is not really appropriate for young people to live in. First of all, there is no pulsating nightlife, which means energetic young blood can't really find lots of places to go at night. Second of all, there aren't many educational facilities, which is why many people, young people, are seeking their degree in foreign countries. The government, however, is trying to do lots of things to attract more young people to my hometown.
🗣 Even though the infrastructure is booming in my hometown, I still have to admit that the place is not really appropriate for young people to live in. First of all, there is no pulsating nightlife, which means energetic young blood can't really find lots of places to go at night. Second of all, there aren't many educational facilities, which is why many people, young people, are seeking their degree in foreign countries. The government, however, is trying to do lots of things to attract more young people to my hometown.
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Is there any tradion about naming babies?
🗣Yes, there are definitely some traditions in my country that are passed down from generation to generation when it comes to naming babies. Many people tend to choose religious names, as these often carry special meanings that are important in our faith. It’s also quite common to name babies after their ancestors as a way of honoring them and keeping their memory alive.
🗣Yes, there are definitely some traditions in my country that are passed down from generation to generation when it comes to naming babies. Many people tend to choose religious names, as these often carry special meanings that are important in our faith. It’s also quite common to name babies after their ancestors as a way of honoring them and keeping their memory alive.
Does your name have special meaning?
🗣I really like my name because of its special meaning, it means a lot to me. First of all, it’s meaningful because it was given to me by my grandfather, so it always reminds me of him and the bond we shared. Secondly, the meaning of my name is quite profound. It stands for a strong man, someone with firm principles and a clear sense of integrity. I try to live up to that meaning in my daily life.
🗣I really like my name because of its special meaning, it means a lot to me. First of all, it’s meaningful because it was given to me by my grandfather, so it always reminds me of him and the bond we shared. Secondly, the meaning of my name is quite profound. It stands for a strong man, someone with firm principles and a clear sense of integrity. I try to live up to that meaning in my daily life.
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