🌿 Today's Session of #nowyouknowwithena: Writing A Review - A Place Of Nature Edition!

Title:

β€’ mention the natural place you visited
β€’ make it simple and relevant
example: A Peaceful Getaway at Lata Kinjang


Paragraph 1: Introduction

β€’ say what you are reviewing (waterfall, beach, hill, park, etc.)
β€’ mention the name and your general opinion
β€’ explain why you went there

Template:
If you are looking for [type of place], you should definitely visit [name]. I recently went there with [who/why], and I found it to be truly [opinion]. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about it and why you might love it too.

Example:
If you are looking for a peaceful escape into nature, you should definitely visit Lata Kinjang. I recently went there with my family during the school holidays, and I found it to be truly refreshing. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about the place and why you might love it too.


Paragraph 2: What It’s About

β€’ describe the location and natural features
β€’ mention the environment or scenery

Template:
The place is located in [location] and is famous for [natural feature]. It has [description of what you saw]. The air was [adjective], and the view was [adjective], making it perfect for [activity].

Example:
The place is located in Perak and is famous for its tall waterfall surrounded by a forest. It has cool, fresh air and beautiful clear water flowing down the rocks. The view was breathtaking, making it perfect for picnics and relaxing with loved ones.


Paragraph 3: What You Liked

β€’ highlight your favourite part
β€’ use expressive adjectives and describe how it felt
β€’ mention one specific activity or moment

Template:
What I loved most about [place] was [highlight]. It was [adjective] and made me feel [emotion]. I especially enjoyed [specific thing you did].

Example:
What I loved most about Lata Kinjang was the sound of the waterfall and the calm surroundings. It was soothing and made me feel completely relaxed. I especially enjoyed dipping my feet into the cold water while listening to the sound of nature.


Paragraph 4: What You Learnt or Felt

β€’ reflect on how nature made you feel
β€’ mention personal thoughts or what you realised there

Template:
One thing that stayed with me was how [place] made me feel. It reminded me that [personal reflection]. I think many people would benefit from this kind of experience, especially those who [group].

Example:
One thing that stayed with me was how calm and stress-free I felt during the trip. It reminded me that sometimes we just need to disconnect from the busy world and enjoy the beauty around us. I think many students would benefit from this kind of experience, especially after exams or a long week at school.


Paragraph 5: Conclusion

β€’ wrap up your thoughts
β€’ say who should go there
β€’ give a rating if you want

Template:
To conclude, [place] is a [adjective] place for anyone who loves nature. I would recommend it to [target group]. I would rate it [rating] out of 10!

Example:
To conclude, Lata Kinjang is a beautiful and peaceful place for anyone who loves nature. I would recommend it to families, students, or anyone looking to escape the city. I would rate it 9 out of 10!

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🌿 Extra Notes:

β€’ use cohesive devices: (what I loved most, in addition, one thing that stayed with me, to conclude, especially, etc.)
β€’ keep it 200–250 words
β€’ be expressive and sincere β€” nature reviews are meant to feel calm & peaceful πŸ’—
full review example -

A Peaceful Getaway at Lata Kinjang

If you are looking for a peaceful escape into nature, you should definitely visit Lata Kinjang. I recently went there with my family during the school holidays, and I found it to be truly refreshing. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about the place and why you might love it too.

To begin with, the place is located in Tapah, Perak, and is famous for its tall and beautiful waterfall. Surrounded by lush greenery, it offers visitors a relaxing experience away from the noise of the city. Moreover, the cool breeze, fresh air, and sound of rushing water made the whole area feel calm and soothing. It is the perfect spot for a picnic, nature walk, or simply to unwind.

What I loved most about Lata Kinjang was how untouched and natural it felt. In fact, it was so peaceful that I felt deeply connected to nature. I especially enjoyed sitting by the river, dipping my feet in the cold water while listening to the sound of the waterfall. Additionally, there were plenty of shaded areas for resting and enjoying the scenery.

One thing that truly stayed with me was how calm and stress-free I felt during the trip. It reminded me that sometimes, we just need to disconnect from our busy lives and appreciate the beauty of the natural world. I believe many students, particularly those dealing with school stress, would benefit from an experience like this.

To conclude, Lata Kinjang is a beautiful and refreshing place for anyone who loves nature. Without a doubt, I would recommend it to students, families, or anyone needing a quiet escape. I would rate it 9 out of 10!
overall, they are quite the same. you just need to adjust the adjectives you're using and the way you elaborate it ! and don't use contractions in your part 2 and part 3 ( i did that just now hihihuhu ). feel free to correct me anytime 🫢
EXTRASSSSSS ! #nowyouknowwithena

✨ how to apply good grammar in your spm essay (the easy way)

1. use the correct tense (past or present?)

- use past tense when you're telling a story or reviewing something you've already done.

βœ… i visited the waterfall last week.
❌ i visit the waterfall last week.
- use present tense when you’re giving facts or general opinions.

βœ… it is a great place to relax.

2. check subject–verb agreement

- singular subject = singular verb

βœ… he enjoys the view.
❌ he enjoy the view.
- plural subject = plural verb

βœ… they enjoy the view.

3. watch your articles (a, an, the)

- use β€œa” before words starting with consonant sounds

βœ… a place to stay
- use β€œan” before vowel sounds

βœ… an unforgettable trip
- use β€œthe” for something specific

βœ… the river near the mountain

4. use connectors & cohesive devices

- they make your grammar smoother πŸ’…

βœ… firstly, in addition, as a result, however, to conclude

5. avoid run-on sentences

- don’t cram too much in one sentence

❌ i went to the beach it was nice we had fun and we swam.
βœ… i went to the beach. it was nice. we had fun and swam in the sea.

6. use correct pronouns

βœ… my family and i enjoyed our trip.
βœ… it reminded me of how peaceful nature can be.

7. check your prepositions

βœ… at the waterfall, in the park, on the weekend

8. use a variety of sentence structures

- mix simple, compound, and complex sentences

βœ… the view was beautiful. (simple)
βœ… i loved the view, and the air was fresh. (compound)
βœ… although it rained, we still had a great time. (complex)

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✨ easy grammar glow-up checklist before you submit:

βœ… are your tenses consistent?
βœ… did you use correct articles and prepositions?
βœ… are your verbs agreeing with the subjects?
βœ… do your sentences flow smoothly with connectors?
βœ… did you avoid long, messy sentences?
βœ… do all names and first words of sentences start with capital letters?
Here are some idioms for you guys:

1. Tough Cookie πŸͺ - A strong, determined or resilient person
πŸ‘‰ Don't mess with her! - She's a tough cookie.

2. Smart Cookie πŸͺ - A clever or intelligent person
πŸ‘‰ She's a smart cookie! She solved the puzzle in minutes!

Have a nice day everyone!
Oh, hey there, you might have already know me if you have been following the channel since last year. Knowledge never expires and I think the quizzes that were released should give you a rough direction on how to apply your use of English better. Here are the following monthly quizzes for each month, each with a different topic to explore: July for common grammar rules, October for idioms, and December for advanced words and vocabularies. Halfway through the year and another five months till SPM 2025 being held.

Anyway, for this month’s marathon quiz, I would like to focus on commonly confused words. Some English words are fairly similar but the meaning it brings can be drastically different if wrongly used. Well, with that being said, let’s put it to the test and see how well you guys answer.
Does anyone have any idea where is the largest ___?
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61%
desert
39%
dessert
We will be taking this ___ as it is generally safer.
Anonymous Quiz
33%
road
67%
route
The ___ in this place is lovely.
Anonymous Quiz
90%
weather
10%
whether
He has been ___ in the park for thirty minutes.
Anonymous Quiz
7%
wander
47%
wandering
14%
wonder
32%
wondering
I am willing to ___ the offer.
Anonymous Quiz
83%
accept
11%
accepting
4%
except
1%
excepting
This hat ___ well with your outfit today.
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44%
complements
10%
complementing
39%
compliments
6%
complimenting
New Word Today πŸ€“

β€’ pulchritudinous
--> beautiful


example sentence πŸ€“ :
- Joe gazed admiringly at the pulchritudinous brunette.
C'mon guys, share your sentence using the word "pulchritudinous" πŸ‘€

sorry for the long gap, everyone.
I'll do my best to post new words more frequently from now on 🀍

Regards,
Min CMA
___ looking happy today, did you happen to win a lottery?
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94%
You’re
6%
Your
___ already late and you should go to sleep.
Anonymous Quiz
82%
It’s
18%
its
___ one of the most well-known bands in the world.
Anonymous Quiz
90%
They’re
10%
Their
That is just an ___ activity of mine.
Anonymous Quiz
75%
everyday
25%
every day
I ___ busy later, so it will be better if we talk right now.
Anonymous Quiz
51%
maybe
49%
may be
They will arrive ___ later due to a traffic jam.
Anonymous Quiz
45%
sometime
55%
some time
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