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Reading - The Impact of Social Media on Mental Health: A Review of Current Research

Listening - Transcribing an audio depending on students' level and gradually increasing the level is the best way to improve listening skills

Writing - No essays yet. First, we need to make sure that he can easily write any sentence he can think of.

Speaking - This time, we will talk about family. (I am sure that it will be difficult for him to do speaking since most of his knowledge is still passive)

#EnglishLanguageChallenge #Day1 #LanguageLearning #AchieveYourGoals

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I intended to share an essay for DAY 3 of our challenge, but this piece is specifically tailored for advanced students who are adept at employing complex structures and vocabulary in their writing.


#EnglishLanguageChallenge #Day3 #LanguageLearning #AchieveYourGoals

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​​ENCOUNTER - duch kelmoq

1. Encounter difficulties: During their journey, they encountered difficulties navigating through the dense forest.

2. Encounter challenges: As they embarked on their project, they encountered unexpected challenges that required creative solutions.

3. Encounter obstacles: Despite encountering numerous obstacles along the way, they remained determined to reach their goal.

4. Encounter resistance: The proposal encountered resistance from some members of the team, but eventually, they reached a consensus.

5. Encounter problems: They encountered technical problems while setting up the equipment for the event.
6. Encounter opposition: The new policy encountered strong opposition from the community, leading to heated debates.

7. Encounter setbacks: Despite their careful planning, they encountered setbacks that delayed the completion of the project.

8. Encounter a problem: They encountered a problem with the software during the presentation, but they managed to resolve it quickly.

9. Encounter a challenge: As they started their new business, they encountered a challenge in finding reliable suppliers.

10. Encounter an obstacle: They encountered an obstacle in securing funding for their project, but they explored alternative options.
​​HARDLY HAD .... WHEN .....

1. Hardly had I stepped outside when I realized I forgot my keys.

2. Hardly had the meeting begun when the power went out, causing confusion among the attendees.

3. Hardly had she finished her homework when her computer crashed, erasing all her work.

4. Hardly had they arrived at the airport when they received news of their flight's cancellation.

5. Hardly had the concert started when a sudden downpour forced the audience to seek shelter.

6. Hardly had the chef prepared the meal when the fire alarm went off, signaling a kitchen emergency.

7. Hardly had he started his speech when he was interrupted by loud applause from the audience.

8. Hardly had they begun their journey when they encountered heavy traffic on the highway.

9. Hardly had the students begun their exam when the fire drill sounded, disrupting the test.

10. Hardly had the party started when the unexpected arrival of guests caused a stir among the hosts.
Forwarded from Alisher Yakubjanov
The advent of the internet, social media in particular, has gathered significant popularity among teenagers lately. This is essay aims to explore both advantages and disadvantages of social media concerning its impact on teenagers.
To begin with, it is imperative to acknowledge that social media do offer myriad advantages for the adolescent demographic. Firstly, the internet comprises a plethora of diverse information resources that students may deem valuable in enhancing their productivity. For instance, students can leverage the vast reservoir of available information to facilitate the composition of their academic dissertations while graduating. Secondly, contemporaneously, they possess the capability to engage in synchronous discussions on specific subjects, facilitated by real-time online platforms such as Telegram and Zoom within the ambit of social media. Lastly, teenagers have the opportunity to acquire knowledge in various subjects without the constraints of geographical limitations.
On the other hand, social media manifests an array of disadvantages for teenagers as well. Firstly, adolescents are susceptible to becoming targets of online extremist factions, which often direct their focus toward younger demographics, capitalizing on their heightened vulnerability. Secondarily, the pervasive utilization of internet platforms such as Instagram, Facebook, and TikTok can lead to deleterious effects on an individual's physical and mental well-being, stemming from excessive usage. For example, many teenagers now have problems with their eyes, coupled with diminished self-esteem as a result of constant comparison with those "lucky" ones on the internet. Finally, they may waste their valuable time and energy which they can use for better purposes like preparing for a university.
In conclusion, while there are some benefits of social media such as access to the huge reservoir of information available, it has also negative effects on teenagers since it can harm them both physically and mentally.
Biz o`quvchilarimiz bilan birgaikda 3 oydan beri "ACADEMIC ARTICLES" ya'ni ilmiy maqolalar o`qib kelyapmiz.

Bugun esa shu maqolalardagi so`z boyliklarimizni va shu paytgacha o`rgangan gramatika qoidalarimizni ishlatgan holda oddiygina 5 ta gapdan iborat "paragraph" ni kuchaytirdik.

Endi shu ishimizni 50 yoki 100 marta qilsak, writing qay darajaga chiqishini bir o`ylab ko`raylik :)
Bugungi paragraph correction darsimizdan parchalar:

❗️Agar essay yozishni kuchaytirmoqchi bo`lsangiz, Generela English ni yaxshilang. Mantiqan olib qasak IELTS Writing Task 2 da faqat 13 yoki 14 ta gap yozsa bo`ldi.

Shuning uchun IELTS Writing darslari butun dars vaqtida gramatika hatolarini tog`irlash bilan emas balki gaplarni kuchaytirish va ularni ketma ketligini yaxshilashga sarflanishi kerak.
BEFORE:

To begin with, there are various measures to develop English skills such as reading and speaking. Firsly, students have to read more articles, given their interests and they should learn every single new words, using their speech.Secondly, they need good English atmosphere, it really helps them. For example, every weekend they should organize speaking,reading and movie clubs. Lastly, students should allocate their individual times to do this.

AFTER:

To begin with, there are various measures to develop English skills such as reading and speaking. Firstly, students have to read more articles based on their interests, and they should learn every single new word they encounter by incorporating it into their speech. Secondly, they need a good English atmosphere, as it really helps them. For example, every weekend they should organize speaking, reading, and movie clubs. Lastly, students should allocate their individual time to do this.
BEFORE:


In fact, nowadays there are a lot of students that meet with challenges in reading and speaking while their educational way. Firstly, Students should expand domain of vocabulary since it is first trouble for understanding their readings. Secondly, after vocabulary is studied it must be active, if it isn't in the opposite case all hard work will be useless. Fortunately,at this point they can mixed solutions in one by using their vocabulary and structures form reading in speaking. Lastly, reading and speaking by this mixed style should improve their skills and solve this challenge.

AFTER:

"In fact, nowadays, many students encounter challenges in reading and speaking during their educational journey. Firstly, students should expand their vocabulary as it is the first hurdle to understanding their readings. Secondly, once vocabulary is studied, it must be actively used; otherwise, all the hard work will be useless. Fortunately, at this point, they can combine solutions by using their vocabulary and structures from reading in speaking. Lastly, reading and speaking in this mixed style should improve their skills and help overcome this challenge."
BEFORE:

To begin with, there are now a plethora of solutions for students who are facing these issues.Firstly, students themselves have to resolve the serious challenges, focusing on both of them in addition learning learning meticulously since most have a procrastination which usually stems from a laziness.Secondly, they should spend enough time to foster reading because having improved this, the other increased naturally.Lastly, to improve also speaking, students have got to utilize method such as “shadowing”

AFTER:

"To begin with, there are now a plethora of solutions for students who are facing this issue. Firstly, students themselves have to tackle these serious challenges, focusing on both of them in addition to learning meticulously, as most have a tendency to procrastinate, which usually stems from laziness. Secondly, they should spend enough time fostering reading because once this improves, the other will naturally increase. Lastly, to improve speaking as well, students have to utilize methods such as 'shadowing'."
BEFORE:

To begin with, there are a plethora of solutions for students who learn English language. Firstly, i believe, it is students themselves who should deal with the problem by reading more articles and concentrating on this activity. Secondly, they should create an environment where only English learners, discussing watching an English only movie there. Lastly , they should feel what they are studying English for and keep going on their way.

AFTER:

"To begin with, there are a plethora of solutions for students who are learning the English language, particularly regarding their speaking and reading skills. Firstly, I believe it is the students themselves who should address the problem by reading more articles and concentrating on this activity. Secondly, they should create an environment where only English is spoken, for example, by discussing and watching English-only movies. Lastly, they should understand the purpose of studying English and remain motivated to continue on their path."
BEFORE:
To begin with, there are numerous advantages of establishing private businesses. Firstly, people would have more probability to achieve financial freedom if he started own business than the one who works on a 9-5 jobs. Moreover, working for yourself facilitates a person with flexible working hours. For example, the difference between my father who owns a private business and my uncle who works for one of the prestigious companies in Uzbekistan is that my dad goes to work whenever he wishes. Lastly, the more private businesses there are in a country, the more people could be provided with jobs, contributing to the economic development of a country.

AFTER:
To begin with, there are numerous advantages to establishing private businesses. Firstly, individuals have a greater likelihood of achieving financial freedom by starting their own businesses compared to those who work traditional 9-5 jobs. Moreover, owning a business provides flexible working hours. For instance, unlike my uncle who adheres to a strict schedule at a prestigious company in Uzbekistan, my father, who owns a private business, can choose when to go to work. Lastly, an increase in private businesses within a country not only provides more job opportunities but also contributes to its economic development.
BEFORE:
However, owning a business does have quite a few disadvantages as well. Firstly, entrepreneurs are more likely to have issues related to mental health than someone who works for others. For instance, the pressures of managing finances, meeting customer expectations, and handling day-to-day operations can lead to significant stress and anxiety. Secondly, private businesses owners have far more responsibilities than their workers, adding to the burden they already have. Finally, the pandemic in 2020 proved that any business can go bankrupt at any time; this along with above mentioned drawback shows that owning a business is not always beneficial.

AFTER:
However, owning a business does have several disadvantages as well. Firstly, entrepreneurs are more likely to experience mental health issues than those employed by others. The pressures of managing finances, meeting customer expectations, and handling day-to-day operations can lead to significant stress and anxiety. Secondly, business owners face far more responsibilities than their employees, compounding their existing burdens. Finally, the pandemic in 2020 demonstrated that businesses can go bankrupt unexpectedly. This vulnerability, coupled with the aforementioned challenges, shows that owning a business is not always advantageous.
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