🔹Intro A

In many parts of the globe, today, segregation of male and female learners is widely doubted and considered obsolete. In those places, the benefits of coeducation for students are deemed to be huge and irreplaceable. Single-sex education, however, has its own proponents, placing more importance on students’ performance rather than social involvements at schools. Whether separation of genders in schooling years, on the whole, yields more fruitful outcomes needs an analytical assessment of both policies.

🔷Intro B

Educational systems and models imposing segregation of schools have been around for centuries. Meanwhile, coeducation, where male and female learners can be equally and collectively trained for the future life in a more realistic fashion, has also been an alternative in a number of countries. This essay spotlights these two existing policies and sizes up each by focusing on some of their capabilities and qualities.

🔹Intro C

Cognitive science, today, extols numerous virtues of the mixed educational system which is widely practiced across the world. However, there are still some dissenting voices, thinking of school segregation as a more trusted approach with proven reliability and effectiveness. In my view, the latter notion can barely respond to students’ future life demands despite the existing arguments for it.

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👇Our end-of-the-year Event👇

📝دوستان و اعضای کانال، در انتهای سال تصمیم گرفتیم مسابقه‌ای رو برگزار کنیم و شرایطش بصورت زیر هست.

1️⃣ یکی از سه پاراگراف مقدمه b , a و یا c از آخرین سمپل انتخاب بشه و با دو پاراگراف body و یک پاراگراف conclusion تکمیل بشه و به id زیر ارسال بشه.
2️⃣ باید برای ما مشخص کنید کدوم یکی از ۳ پاراگراف مقدمه رو انتخاب کردید و در ابتدای پاسخ copy paste بشه.
3️⃣ متن حتما تایپ شده در تلگرام ارسال بشه و داخل فایل دیگه‌ای نباشه.
4️⃣ مجموع تعداد لغات در کل پاسخ نهایی بیشتر از ۳۰۰ کلمه نباشد.
5️⃣ مهلت ارسال فقط تا 《ساعت ۱۵ روز ۲ فروردین》 هست.

🔴 نکات:

❗️تمامی اعضای کانال میتونن شرکت کنند و جوابهاشون رو برای ما بفرستند.

❗️توصیه میشه حتما سمپل‌های قدیمی تر کانال رو مطالعه کنید تا بتونید به بهترین نحو پاراگراف‌های body رو بسط بدید.

❗️راهنمایی مهم : دقت کنید پاراگراف انتخابی شما اگر حاوی مهمترین قسمتهای نظرات نویسنده باشه باید حتما در پاراگراف بدنه بسط داده شه. به عنوان مثال اگر پاراگراف a رو انتخاب کردید حتما مفاهیمی‌مثل performance یا social involvment باید در بدنه توسعه داده بشه.

❗️دقت کنید در ارزیابی کانال IELTS Samples ، کامل بودن پاسخ ‌ (task response) و انسجام و یکپارچگی‌جملات، ایده‌ها و پاراگراف‌ها (Cohesion Coherence) ابتدا ارزیابی میشه و در صورت تایید سپس دامنه واژگان و گرامرهای بکار رفته بررسی میشه. پس متنی که پر باشه از لغتهای سخت ولی قابل خوندن نباشه یا بی ربط نوشته شده باشه رد میشه!!

🎁 پاسخ‌ها توسط اساتید مطالعه میشه و بهترین پاسخ انتخاب میشه و فیدبک کامل با جزییات داده میشه و پس از ادیت به عنوان سمپل برتر همراه با ذکر اسم‌ نویسنده و آی دی در هفته اول فروردین در خروجی کانال قرار داده میشه.

🎁 طی یک یا دو جلسه ورکشاپ آنلاین رایگان داخل کانال، ایرادات مشترک و اصلی پاسخ‌های رسیده انتخاب میشه و مورد بحث قرار میگیره.

💪💪مسابقه مشابهی برای اسپیکینگ در آینده ترتیب داده‌ خواهد شد.

ارسال به:
@ieltssampless

The turn of the year is often seen as a chance to turn over a new leaf. So try to update your dictionary; do away with words such as jealousy, hatred, or disappointment and let words like hope, happiness and affection take their place. Put all the pain and unhappy memories behind you and embrace the new year with a new you.

🎊May you all find the answer to your prayers this year.🎊

🎉Happy New Year.🎉

🧡IELTS Samples team🧡

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🔴Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

▪️To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

@IELTSAliakbarzadehMohammadi

Immigration has always been accompanied by numerous problems. Among them, communicating in the native language of the country immigrants are residing in might seem to be one of the most important ones. Unfortunately, inability to hold a conversation in that language can bring on serious difficulties, both practically and socially.

Not being fluent in the target language, people are very likely to find it hard to lead a normal life in practical terms. For one thing, finding a job or pursuing a higher degree would be all but impossible. To enter an occupation or university, most of the time people have to attend some interviews held in the official language of that country. Therefore, non-fluent candidates stand a slim chance of being accepted. More importantly, this lack of proficiency in language can upset your life routines. Imagine how hard it could be to go shopping, describe your symptoms to a doctor, sign a contract, or even ask for help.

Apart from the practical aspect, being unable to speak in the native language of a country could drive people to social isolation and loneliness. To fit into a new society, immigrants need to have regular contact with the locals . They need to show respect and also earn others'. To do so, communication is required, the most important means of which being the common language spoken in that country. So, the newcomers will probably never assimilate into the society if not proficient enough. Needless to mention, it is easy to imagine a similar scenario in which they cannot establish friendships and, in turn, feel lonely.

To live in a new country is a bold decision for anyone to make, especially those who are not fluent enough in the native tongue of the destination country. Life could be fraught with difficulties for these people both in social and practical terms. Accordingly, immigrants are well-advised to learn the language effectively before making such a decision.

سمپل از پژمان علی اکبرزاده

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🔴Describe a time when you had a problem and someone helped you.
You should say:
▪️What the problem was.
▪️Who the person was who helped you.
▪️What this person did to help to you.
And explain you felt when this person helped you.
@IELTSAliakbarzadehMohammadi

سمپل از محمد مقدسی

#IELTS #Speaking #Part_2 #Sample #Expert

@IELTSAliakbarzadehMohammadi

نکته: در مواجه با چنین سوالاتی که می‌بایست یک موقعیت و یا داستان را در یک دقیقه خلق کنید، توصیه می‌شود در لحظه به سراغ تاپیک‌هایی بروید که روی دامنه واژگان و اصطلاحات آن تسلط بیشتری دارید. به طور نمونه در این سمپل problem را در حیطه موضوع clothes تعریف کرده‌ایم. اگر شما در موضوع objects واژه‌های بیشتری در ذهن دارید می‌توانید در یک داستان فرضی مشکلی در آن رابطه بسازید!

🔍Lexical resource:

Come up against a situation
Be stuck
Solemn ceremony
Be dressed up to the nine
Wear sth to somewhere
Do/tie a tie knot
Leave no stone unturned
Have a knack for doing sth
A mountain to climb
There is nothing to it
Tick away
With panache
Turn sb's head
Heartthrob
Dressed to kill
Owe sb a debt of gratitude
Return the favour
Incidentally
Sth awaits sb


🔍GRA:

Causatives (have sb do sth)
Conjunctions (whereas)
Past perfect


سمپل و نکات از دکتر محمد مقدسی
@mohamadmdsi

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🔴 The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

▪️Do you agree or disagree?

@IELTSAliakbarzadehMohammadi

E-commerce had long been predicted to be the shape of things to come, and it actually came true. Online shopping- subsumed under this type of commerce- is booming as never before, so much so that it is expected to put every brick-and-mortar store out of business. This, despite the startling pace at which internet shopping is growing, seems to be too extreme a forecast.

There is no denying the fact that the convenience of buying online is turning more and more people away from the traditional way. They can buy virtually every item they want at the touch of a button without experiencing difficulties such as traffic hold-ups or long hours of walk searching different shops. They might even purchase their needed articles at bargain prices because internet-based businesses have considerably lower overhead compared to traditional ones. All these features are discouraging more customers from making a purchase the old-fashioned way. However, this trend will never culminate in the closure of all retailers given the inherent shortcomings of online purchase.

The first flaw associated with this method of shopping is phishing. With a rise in online shopping comes an increase in data breaches; this is why many shoppers are still indisposed to use these services. Unfortunately, not even a week goes by that we do not hear about cybercrime, and this type of crime will become rampant in the future. Apart from the perils, there are and will always be people who prefer to go to malls and shops simply because it is an enjoyable hobby for them or even a means of catharsis. The internet can never obviate these needs, at least for the foreseeable future, so traditional businesses may lose some custom but not all of it. After all, where there is a need, there is a service.

Considering the popularity of cyber shopping and how convenient it can be, a future surge in this practice is not far-fetched. Nevertheless, brick-and-mortar businesses will never lose all their customers, taking the weaknesses of the internet into account, and therefore not all of them will be forced to fold.

سمپل از پژمان علی اکبرزاده

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🔴Describe a person who taught you something.
You should say:
▪️who this person is.
▪️What he/she taught you.
▪️How this helped you.
And how you felt about him/her.

@IELTSAliakbarzadehMohammadi

سمپل از فرناز کلانتری

#IELTS #Speaking #Part_2 #Sample #Expert

@IELTSAliakbarzadehMohammadi

🔎 Lexical resource:

Lay eyes on something
Sought-after
Stand out
Be conversant with something
Ins and outs of
Pass up an opportunity
Forte
Dig up
Notably
Somebody’s passive vocabulary
Be rocket science
Get taken aback
Presence of mind
Enunciation
Conjure up


🔎 GRA:

Present perfect
Conditionals
Passive
Reduction
Inversion
Past modals

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🔴Describe your favourite music band.

You should say:

▪️what music band it is
▪️how do people react to the music of this band
▪️when you first heard their songs/music

and explain why this is your favourite music band.

@IELTSAliakbarzadehMohammadi

سمپل از بهداد بیات

#Speaking #Part_2 #Sample
#Modest

@IELTSAliakbarzadehMohammadi